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on、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。5.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺(tái),生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ):powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問(wèn)題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。6. 中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng),代代相傳。近期各校都在開(kāi)展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文,請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇報(bào)道,介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國(guó)成語(yǔ)故事”活動(dòng)并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問(wèn)題: ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:例文采用三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng);因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦,所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí);對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。:短語(yǔ):in order to,take part in,lots of,learn from,in the process of,What’s more,have a good time。句型:被動(dòng)句型。7.你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明,你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy,感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心,并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí),并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。要點(diǎn)如下: (1). 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好,但是你對(duì)自己不滿意。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。 (2). 你的父母對(duì)你嚴(yán)格要求,但是也很關(guān)心你。(舉例說(shuō)明,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句)…… (3). 老師很樂(lè)意幫助你們。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。他們說(shuō)(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句)……注意: (1). 要求語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫。 (2). 第2要點(diǎn)和第3要點(diǎn)要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 (3). 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右,郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the seni