【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ___________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應該怎么做。因此文章應主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復合句；語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結構清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習慣。句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。8．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結構，易于掌握，不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次，也應穿插一些并列句結構或復合句，以及使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實、豐富。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達86. 如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。上周我班學生對如何減壓、放松進行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去中國科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請交換生Peter參加。請用英語寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語: school gate, 8:00, invention, expe