【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 fes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。為了使語(yǔ)言更顯親切，在寫作時(shí)主語(yǔ)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，做到語(yǔ)意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求，結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)對(duì)考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。● 清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（福建中考模擬）寬容是一種美德，人與人之間難免會(huì)有磕磕絆絆，面對(duì)矛盾，多一份包容和諒解，生活 就會(huì)多一縷陽(yáng)光。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括：你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對(duì)方，以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。 注意：不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。提示詞語(yǔ)：forgive原諒提示問題：What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between ...【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o39。clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn39。t show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing puter games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對(duì)方，以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀提示問題（ happened between you and him/her? did you decide to forgive him/her? did you feel after forgiving him/her? still remember what happened between ...），提示問題就是本文的提示要點(diǎn)，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在80詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我還記得我朋友邁克和我之間發(fā)生的事。兩個(gè)月前，邁克邀請(qǐng)我七點(diǎn)鐘去聽音樂會(huì)。我準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)那里。我等了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。我打電話問他發(fā)生了什么事。他把音樂會(huì)的一切都忘了。那時(shí)他在家里玩電腦游戲。我生邁克的氣是因?yàn)樗麄α宋业母星椤＿~克也意識(shí)到了他的錯(cuò)誤。他給我打了好幾次電話，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件禮物讓我開心。最后我原諒了他。原諒他之后，我感到輕松愉快?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時(shí)應(yīng)該從以下幾個(gè)方面來(lái)規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說(shuō)“謝謝”、“ 對(duì)不起”、“ 請(qǐng)”等禮貌語(yǔ)言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,_________________________________________________________________.Finally,________________________________________________________________.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出中學(xué)生應(yīng)從表格中的幾個(gè)方面來(lái)規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中had better，by