【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 稱為第三人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意語法正確，善用連詞，使各個要點連貫。【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。who has a serious illness為定語從句。【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life ，她仍然笑對生活。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語從句。8．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動．要點如下：（1）嚴格要求（2）耐心指導（3）熱情鼓勵；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分第一部分：開篇點題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認真工作的人。老師對我嚴格要求。在我考試失利時鼓勵我。第三部分：再次點題，對老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．9．（中央民族大學附屬中學昆明五華實驗學校中考模擬）A good book is important to me要求：1. 緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?！敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文，根據(jù)題目一本好書對我是重要的，自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容，可以是你讀了什么書，該書對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書為什么對你來說是重要的。【詳解】本篇文章主要從為什么對我重要這個角度來寫。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息，所以需要學生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達假如你是Amy，德國的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔的家務(wù)勞動；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字數(shù)約110詞。Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Wele to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whateveritis and say how delicious it is. If you feel unfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it39。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達邀請和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累和寫作練習以外，還應(yīng)該適當背誦一些類似的范