【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意語(yǔ)法正確，善用連詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎he takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。who has a serious illness為定語(yǔ)從句。【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life ，她仍然笑對(duì)生活。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。8．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文雜志社正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)從以下要點(diǎn)中選擇一至兩個(gè)方面，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動(dòng)．要點(diǎn)如下：（1）嚴(yán)格要求（2）耐心指導(dǎo)（3）熱情鼓勵(lì)；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴(yán)格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導(dǎo)）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵(lì)）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語(yǔ)老師的原因老師是一個(gè)認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時(shí)鼓勵(lì)我。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因?yàn)槟愕恼n非常生動(dòng)有趣，對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很簡(jiǎn)單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時(shí)候，你鼓勵(lì)我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語(yǔ)encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．9．（中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬）A good book is important to me要求：1. 緊扣主題，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書(shū)寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請(qǐng)用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?！敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文，根據(jù)題目一本好書(shū)對(duì)我是重要的，自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容，可以是你讀了什么書(shū)，該書(shū)對(duì)你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書(shū)為什么對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)是重要的?！驹斀狻勘酒恼轮饕獜臑槭裁磳?duì)我重要這個(gè)角度來(lái)寫。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。題目并沒(méi)有給過(guò)多的提示信息，所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是Amy，德國(guó)的交換生Sara下周即將來(lái)你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來(lái)信，在信中，她詢問(wèn)如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問(wèn)題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過(guò)得開(kāi)心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約110詞。Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Wele to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whateveritis and say how delicious it is. If you feel unfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it39。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請(qǐng)你向他發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問(wèn)題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方并給出建議，需使用表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句式，注意長(zhǎng)短搭配，并在行文中增加細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡，使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累和寫作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范