【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談談你對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q，談談自己對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認識以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談談怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當。8．（山東中考模擬）書面表達下面的圖片描述了昨天下午發(fā)生在四年級三班教室里的情景。小林和小剛之間的對話，讓你 想到了什么？請根據(jù)你對圖片的理解，用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 完整描述圖片內(nèi)容； 2. 簡要闡述你的觀點和看法。 寫作要求：1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息，進行適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 提示詞： 手提電腦 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to pare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場景用英語表達出來，是一篇看圖作文。首先學生們應仔細觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場景，弄清楚它主要想傳達的意思，然后用英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文的內(nèi)容應主要包括兩個部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對該事情闡述自己的觀點和看法。短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意：首先短文內(nèi)容應符合圖片表達的意思，不能會錯意，寫偏、寫錯；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實、完整。其次要注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。用從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎，穿插并列句或復合句結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文水平，應注意應用高級詞匯和復雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)你暯映煞?，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，作者通過觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達的信息，確定了文章的中心。文章內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述清晰、有層次。作者觀點明確，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式，注意了過去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句、并列句、復合句交替應用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達隨著中國國際地位的日益提高，越來越多的外國友人開始關(guān)注中國。假定你是李明，你最近認識的澳大利亞筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想更多地了解中國。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的了解用英語回復。To: Li Ming@ 163. From: David@ bigpond. Dear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? It39。s February. It39。s very hot in Australia nowand I39。m having a long summer vacation. I39。m making a trip plan to Chin