【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生介紹自己最喜歡的老師?！驹斀狻窟@篇寫作考查考生對(duì)人物的描寫。對(duì)人物的描寫主要從基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及對(duì)其評(píng)價(jià)四個(gè)方面入手?？忌Y(jié)合著四個(gè)方面及所給信息，要做到信息全面，行文連貫。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫9．（遼寧中考模擬）（B）按要求完成大作文（80詞左右）節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求：詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不得透露姓名等個(gè)人信息?！敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活，環(huán)境保護(hù)，注意文章內(nèi)容。【詳解】首先點(diǎn)明如今的生活環(huán)境，越來越差，綠色生活勢(shì)在必行。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性。然后說我在日常生活中對(duì)綠色出行作出的貢獻(xiàn)，騎自行車，出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先正確理解作文題目，不要偏題，本文是關(guān)于綠色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次，在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上，多運(yùn)用連詞，使文章升華，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章更上一檔次。10．（天津中考模擬）假設(shè)你是 Susan，在家里你的父母總是對(duì)你有很多要求，你是否有時(shí)感到厭煩？你是怎樣解決的？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一篇短文。（1）父母要求你每天打掃房間；不能玩電腦游戲；晚上10點(diǎn)前必須睡覺（2）你覺得父母雖太嚴(yán)厲，但理解他們。（3）你決定與父母多交流，為父母做些家務(wù)。（4）你認(rèn)為……。My name is Susan. There are many rules in my 【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，針對(duì)父母對(duì)你要求過多你感到厭煩這一問題，你是如何解決的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求：，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息。詞數(shù)：90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，e ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。12．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，在你的生活中一定有人給予你無私的愛和幫助。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展題為 The person I want to thank 征文比賽。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？提示詞語: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard提示問題:Who do you want to thank? Why do you want to thank him/her? What do you learn from him/her?The person I want to thank______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級(jí)的語言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。13．