【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)，英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部就“是否愿意為別人投票選舉”這一話題展開(kāi)來(lái)討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，向?？陡?，選擇你認(rèn)同的一種觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，方便，免費(fèi)可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜歡的人……投票方式不公平浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，無(wú)聊……注意：1. 根據(jù)你認(rèn)同的方式，將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，省略號(hào)內(nèi)容必須補(bǔ)充完整2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名，詞數(shù)：801003. 短文首句僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I _____ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people havedifferent ideas. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I am willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【解析】【詳解】本篇是一篇議論文，首先要要題目補(bǔ)充完整，說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對(duì)。文章分為三步走：第一段擺出自己的觀點(diǎn)；接下來(lái)第二段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，即說(shuō)明自己的理由；最后一段對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很條理性和連貫性。最后In a word, I think….對(duì)自己觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行最后總結(jié)。非常好的一篇文章。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大。上周我班學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)近年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲc(diǎn)：AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games。Your opinion…要求：，短文連貫通順； ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by 【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the they are active in class.Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students should use iPad in teachers don’t allow students to play games in is good for students to use iPad in class.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題意近年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶āＮ覀兯龅氖紫仁菓?yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。11．（湖北中考模擬）在“讓夢(mèng)想照進(jìn)現(xiàn)實(shí)”的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)如下：，對(duì)英語(yǔ)沒(méi)什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。，曾經(jīng)很沮喪，想放棄英語(yǔ)。，自己開(kāi)始認(rèn)真對(duì)待英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。，英語(yǔ)水平有較大的提高。（一兩點(diǎn)）注意：詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： adv. 很少，不常 up 舉起Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here 【答案】Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was s