【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 _________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文。【詳解】英語作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點——青少年應該被允許獨自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關建議。第三部分：再次重申論點。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以One thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以One thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。或使用祈使句、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（海南中考模擬）假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談談你的看法并給他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達出對父親的體貼與關愛，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。11．（湖南長郡中學中考模擬）書面表達76,近年來，科技的進步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國青年評選出了中國的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國的一名初中生，她對我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。12．（湖南中考模擬）人們對于學生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點，并表達自己的看法。贊成的理由反對的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達思想3. 有利于外語學習1. 浪費時間2. 影響學習3. 可能上當受騙（be cheated）1. ...2. ...注意：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點并進行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think__________________________________________________________________________________________________