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渡自然,語(yǔ)法正確,富有邏輯性。3. 注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用,80100詞。提示詞語(yǔ): three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.【解析】【分析】本文一篇話題作文?!驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分:第一部分:交代寫作目的:即將畢業(yè),想和大家分享這三年的經(jīng)歷。第二部分:具體介紹三年中最難忘的經(jīng)歷:別人幫助我的經(jīng)歷。第三部分:總結(jié)全文。我愿意幫助別人。9.(上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.(以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時(shí),在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒(méi)有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物,對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面,結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。(注意:段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。)The following is for reference only(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】:該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物,對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。:例文采用三段式:用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容:時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去式為主,敘述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷,敘述完整清晰。:短語(yǔ):full of;in public;again and again;all the time;encourage sb to do sth;do one’s best;with the support of。句型:such…that…;so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句;whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句;used to do。10.(安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學(xué)中考模擬)當(dāng)前,我市各學(xué)校正在開展“好書伴我成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)活動(dòng)主題并結(jié)合表格信息,以“Growing up with Good books”為題,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約80個(gè)單詞的倡議書,向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的益處獲取知識(shí)、開闊視野、使人快樂(lè) 存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂(lè)、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間發(fā)出倡議多讀書,讀經(jīng)典好書。讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分。要求:;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如not only…but also,the more …the more,spend much time in doing,listen to music,watch TV,go online,play games,much of,like to do,so that,a part of等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ,既豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11.(湖北中考模擬)在“讓夢(mèng)想照進(jìn)現(xiàn)實(shí)”的主題班會(huì)上,同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)如下:,對(duì)英語(yǔ)沒(méi)什么興趣,上課很少舉手發(fā)言。,曾經(jīng)很沮喪,想放棄英語(yǔ)。,自己開始認(rèn)真對(duì)待英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。,英語(yǔ)水平有較大的提高。(一兩點(diǎn))注意:詞數(shù)60—80,文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯: adv. 很少,不常 up 舉起Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here