【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 se of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇人物介紹。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊，介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績(jī)優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意語(yǔ)法正確，善用連詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎he takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。who has a serious illness為定語(yǔ)從句。【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life ，她仍然笑對(duì)生活。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。7．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)某英文雜志社正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)從以下要點(diǎn)中選擇一至兩個(gè)方面，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動(dòng)．要點(diǎn)如下：（1）嚴(yán)格要求（2）耐心指導(dǎo)（3）熱情鼓勵(lì)；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴(yán)格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導(dǎo)）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵(lì)）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文。【詳解】英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語(yǔ)老師的原因老師是一個(gè)認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時(shí)鼓勵(lì)我。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因?yàn)槟愕恼n非常生動(dòng)有趣，對(duì)我們來(lái)說學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很簡(jiǎn)單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時(shí)候，你鼓勵(lì)我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語(yǔ)encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．8．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容。提示詞：plate 盤子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆， color 給…上色， _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, Why not turn them into paintings? Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個(gè)故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題和一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的應(yīng)用，使短文內(nèi)容表達(dá)豐富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)和句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢。9．（北京中考模擬）“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅?，以及為什么這樣做。提示詞語(yǔ)： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談?wù)勛约旱暮玫膶W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在寫作時(shí),要根據(jù)提出的幾個(gè)問題為中心圍繞展開，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁?. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。10．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機(jī)終端發(fā)展，成癮性網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲使一些中學(xué)生沉迷其中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步和身心健康。上周你們學(xué)校開展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中的要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇短文，提出一些意見。學(xué)校要做些什么；，如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長(zhǎng)要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學(xué)生要做些什么……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意 ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, go