【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ion is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要描述如何面對(duì)中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我們面對(duì)中考會(huì)感到擔(dān)心，接下來(lái)介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，作為活動(dòng)主持人，你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Smith 先生來(lái)參加本周末學(xué)校開(kāi)展的“英語(yǔ)戲劇展示”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)函，告訴他本次活動(dòng)的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。提示詞語(yǔ):wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。m glad to tell you there39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語(yǔ)戲劇展示活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（江蘇中考模擬） 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國(guó)青少年近視率居世界第一。年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。以下表格是學(xué)校針對(duì)本校學(xué)生近視問(wèn)題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。我校學(xué)生的近視問(wèn)題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。原因1. 不良的看書(shū)習(xí)慣，如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看書(shū)……2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對(duì)眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯： 近視 nearsighted 注意： 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 詞數(shù)：80100，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don39。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。t read in the sun。 don39。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書(shū)的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開(kāi)一英尺。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。11．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)你看過(guò)中央電視臺(tái)董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書(shū)的美好、讀書(shū)的重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中所列的要點(diǎn)，以“Growing Up with Reading”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縃ave you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading bee a part of our life!【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是“讀書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)”，以“Growing Up with Reading（讀書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)）”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容