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Yours,Wang Ping要求:1.語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確,語意要通順、連貫;2.詞數(shù)80100左右,電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:欺騙tick;許可permissionDear Wang Ping,I39。m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using I believe things will get better, Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang PingI‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very mon . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作,寫一封回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),確定寫作內(nèi)容,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài),寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據(jù)題目要求,層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要,意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important.;Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?10.(廣西中考模擬) 假設(shè)你是李磊,在家里你的父母總是對你在學(xué)習(xí)、衛(wèi)生、作息上有許多要求,對這些要求你分別有什么看法?你是怎樣解決的?要求:1. 詞數(shù)80個左右;2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 語氣通順,意思連貫,語法正確,條理清楚,字跡工整;4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, everyone. My name is Li Lei. My parents love me very much. But it doesn’t mean I can do everything I want at home.First, I should finish my homework before Saturday evening to make sure I have enough time to make a review. It’s necessary. Second, I have to do washing by myself. This means I won’t have enough time to play. I don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. Third, I must sleep before 11 in the evening and get up at 6 in the morning. I hope I could sleep till 10 am someday.My friends seldom have enough time to relax either. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的父母對你在學(xué)習(xí)、衛(wèi)生、作息上的要求是什么。主要從你對此有什么看法,以及你是怎樣解決的,這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縏his means I won’t have enough time to play. 這意味著我沒有足夠的時間玩。句子I won’t have enough time to ?!靖叻志湫投縄 don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. 我真的不明白他們?yōu)槭裁匆疫@么做。句子why they ask me to do so. 是由why引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。11.(四川中考模擬)書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始,你將面對新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境,請根據(jù)下列提示,以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題,用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求:,進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范,注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息。詞數(shù):90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如senior high school,go to do,like doing,do some sports,such as,play basketball,play tennis,get on well with,make progress,after school,hope to do,in the free time,e ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing ,使本文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)流暢,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子,最后把這些句子連在一起即可。12.(全國中考模擬)假如你是Ivy,你們學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞,從我做起”主題教育活動。請你根據(jù)所列提示問題談?wù)勀銓@個活動的認(rèn)識,用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿。提示問題:(1) Why do you show your kindness to others? (At least one reason)(2) What do you usually do when someone needs help? (At least two examples)(3) How do you feel?寫作要求:(1) 表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;(2) 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; (3) 詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(4) 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.