【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 e polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著陽(yáng)光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國(guó)的開展，“每天鍛煉一小時(shí)，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一輩子?！?的理念深入人心，校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化。請(qǐng)以“Sports in Our School”為題給校園英文報(bào)寫 一篇 80 詞左右的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：Time for sportsKinds of sportsChange of students’ health and studyChange of school life要求：（1）文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；（3）內(nèi)容完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫規(guī)范。Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. 【答案】Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three . classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day．Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.Our school life is being more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如more than，at least，more and more,take an active part in, a good way to, what’s more，動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。● 清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（山東中考模擬） 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來(lái)陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．（江蘇中考模擬）臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everyt