【正文】 s important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉叄籶ut your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。2．（s good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信，書信的內(nèi)容為方法策略，給外國筆友推薦一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法?！靖叻志湫汀縄t39。句子為It is+形容詞+to do ，句中it為形式主語，真正的主語為不定式短語。廣東中考模擬）假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。寫作時，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。穿插一些高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。4．（但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。 觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點(diǎn)1. 2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。t control themselves and often play games. What39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。如but, so, then等?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對學(xué)生是有幫助的。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會參觀。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。2. 例文點(diǎn)評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。d better …；I39。6．（請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點(diǎn)，你們將在孤兒院做什么，以及他可以做什么準(zhǔn)備。本材料給的提示比較多，學(xué)生可以按照提示，進(jìn)行問題的回答即可?！驹斀狻课恼聻檠埿?，開頭問候，點(diǎn)明寫信內(nèi)容，寫信是為了邀請你和我們一起參加希望之家的志愿活動。同時，建議對方做一些事情，可以向孩子們展示一下你的家鄉(xiāng)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本書面表達(dá)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，文章具有條理性，思維縝密。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。注意表達(dá)的順序。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。揚(yáng)州中學(xué)教育集團(tuán)樹人學(xué)校初三）現(xiàn)在有些學(xué)生缺乏“感恩”意識，對待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠，而且行為方式和價值觀令人擔(dān)憂。學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?，不知道感恩為什么要感恩父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；老師的授業(yè)之恩；朋友的……怎樣感恩……（至少兩點(diǎn)） 要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著陽光體育運(yùn)動在全國的開展，“每天鍛煉一小時，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一輩子。請以“Sports in Our School”為題給校園英文報寫 一篇 80 詞左右的報道。Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. 【答案】Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three . classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day．Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.Our school life is being more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動的變化。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文