【正文】 ryone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。長沙市開福區(qū)青竹湖湘一外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣是非常重要的。內(nèi)容：健康飲食；早睡早起，不熬夜；參加運(yùn)動，強(qiáng)身健體。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthy habitI think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。天津中考模擬） 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進(jìn)行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。（I think ???；try one39。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。【答案】I39。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬） 年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會，會上我市正式啟動了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識，同時組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動，承擔(dān)起對市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。Don39。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個人都出一份力，我們的城市會越來越美?！军c(diǎn)睛】10．（某校也就“是否想要個弟弟或妹妹”對部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次問卷調(diào)查。問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如下:觀點(diǎn)支持反對人數(shù)比例40%60%原因。3.……。3.……要求:。、地名。Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.【答案】Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or opinions are different.Here are the results. About forty percent students think it39。t feel lonely anymore. What39。ll get freedom.But others disagree. They think they won39。t love them as much as before. Besides,they39。s hard to say whether it39。 choices. After all,they39。根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。11．（你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求：，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息。詞數(shù)：90110 詞左右。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do s