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two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如in recent years,as a product of,live in,more and more,so…that,for example,do harm to,be harmful to,in my opinion,take the place of,instead of等。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。學會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學會微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。有益于身心健康。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。參考詞匯: 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,不要逐字翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。寫作時要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語的影響,要用地道的英語表達,注意時態(tài),語態(tài),單詞拼寫,語法等問題,用好簡單句,適當用復雜句。還要注意句子的關聯(lián)。為了倡導中學生接近大自然,某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動,請你根據(jù)以下問題,用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結(jié)合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。一直以來,同學們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。【答案】Dear students,I39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準確,注意正確使用連詞,