【正文】 wo pieces of a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and fortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。海林市朝鮮族中學(xué)中考模擬）（B） 如今，許多學(xué)生課下熱衷于在手機(jī)上聊天，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶ㄅc建議。80～100詞。結(jié)果：對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)不感興趣，不愿面對(duì)面交流。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。6．（從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫(xiě)一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿?！敬鸢浮縄t’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述眼睛的重要性以及如何保護(hù)眼睛。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。初寫(xiě)短文。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤(rùn)色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。廣東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。武漢外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)長(zhǎng)跑是人們熱衷的體育活動(dòng)之一。假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom想知道關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：；，人們可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以結(jié)識(shí)新朋友；，吸引了很多人的關(guān)注；,如：中山大道、東湖綠道、黃鶴樓，被視為最美的馬拉松賽道；。re doing well. In your , you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運(yùn)用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個(gè)高級(jí)句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫(xiě)電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，個(gè)別句子使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。9．（學(xué)校國(guó)際部正在招募接待英國(guó)學(xué)生的志愿者，陪伴他們度過(guò)周末。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，在信中說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由，以及你打算拿給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng)。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.I39?！驹斀狻浚缘谝蝗朔Q向?qū)W校國(guó)際部申請(qǐng)當(dāng)志愿者；根據(jù)材料提示，介紹自己的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，計(jì)劃如何安排周末活動(dòng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。文體正確，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。如：用不定式would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students闡述自己的愿望，make friends、It39。10．（m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day. Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，I39。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。 take part in參加； keep the air clean 保持空氣干凈11．（2在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。一例）。2在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。如He is always ready to