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smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文,要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn),首先要研究表格,找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn),然后加以整合,也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫,但要點(diǎn)一定要全,不能漏掉??梢杂靡恍└呒?jí)詞匯。4. “美麗的瓊海我的家,人人都要保護(hù)她”。作為一名中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。通過(guò)審題可知,這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述:即應(yīng)該做什么;不應(yīng)該做什么。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第一人稱we來(lái)敘述。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、流暢。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整,文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表,補(bǔ)充了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面,對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)句通順,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。5.書(shū)面表達(dá)(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由,只給了一些短語(yǔ),我們需要組織語(yǔ)言,將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái),并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:支持的人們的理由;反對(duì)者們的理由;自己的看法,可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,有層次。為提升文章檔次,還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。文章分為三段,第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的,因此了文章的話題。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體,句式準(zhǔn)確,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。6.假如你叫李華,最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。你通過(guò)微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館,接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?,最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。7.書(shū)面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃?;顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講;2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。短詩(shī)如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項(xiàng):,不得抄寫(xiě)短詩(shī)原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________