【正文】 ______________________________________________________________I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。4．臨近畢業(yè)，學校在學習小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一 份素質(zhì)報告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認為看書有很多好處（請列舉個好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉今年，學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實際情況提點建議）…要求：表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。表達準確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達的連貫。 5．為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。6． 朋友是我們生活的組成部分，他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。題目給出了標題及寫作要點。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情，要用到一般過去時態(tài)。【點睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的