【正文】 eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述眼睛的重要性以及如何保護(hù)眼睛。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)前，我市各學(xué)校正在開展“好書伴我成長”活動。讀書的益處獲取知識、開闊視野、使人快樂 存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書。要求：；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。天津中考模擬）近日中央電視臺報道了一個十四歲小男孩何思汗的事跡，介紹了他賣畫籌款醫(yī)治姑姑的感人故事。（1）何思汗從小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼對繪畫有很大興趣。（3）他作畫籌款給姑姑治病。（5）你的想法……參考詞匯：嚴(yán)重的serious 疾病disease要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。8．（父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學(xué)會愛，感受愛。請根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語短文。4）詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。9．（內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結(jié)尾。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。江蘇中考模擬）俗話說，國有國法，家有家規(guī)。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。要點提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼，禮貌待人誠實守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息，杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)正在舉辦英語征文比賽，請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點，用英語以“Learn to Smile”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。對他人微笑使人與人更親近，帶來友誼。注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐句翻譯；2．表格中省略部分須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3．詞數(shù)90左