【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _____________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點(diǎn)。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨(dú)自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。第三部分：再次重申論點(diǎn)。8．（河南中考模擬）親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請(qǐng)你以“My English Study”為題，請(qǐng)你談一談，這三年以來(lái)，你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的心得體會(huì)。要求：、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。條理清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。否則，試卷按零分處理?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。接下來(lái)敘述自己遇到的各種學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的困難：聽(tīng)不懂老師的英語(yǔ)，記憶詞匯短語(yǔ)有困難等等。分別列出，行文流暢。用短語(yǔ)give up放棄，表示困難太大，難倒了自己。后來(lái)在老師的幫助下，克服了困難。逐步地Step by step，不斷取得進(jìn)步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ，結(jié)束全文。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大。上周我班學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范清晰。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。100 詞左右?！敬鸢浮縄39。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（福建中考模擬）親愛(ài)的初三同學(xué)，考試來(lái)臨，畢業(yè)在即，你遇到了人生路上的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)平添了一些煩惱和壓力。當(dāng)前正確面對(duì)煩惱，有效緩解心理壓力非常重要。請(qǐng)以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀阍谏?、學(xué)習(xí)方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對(duì)困難，解決問(wèn)題的方法。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：內(nèi)容完整；書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確；語(yǔ)句通順連貫。 參考詞：stress（壓力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help How to solve our stressThe entrance examination is ing. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these 【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may