【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of 。8．（四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇演講稿。提示：1. 現(xiàn)在存在的環(huán)境問(wèn)題。2. 采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。3） 使用購(gòu)物袋代替塑料袋, 盡量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用廢品等。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入字?jǐn)?shù)。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（云南中考模擬） 假如你叫李華, 三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束, 你將迎來(lái)漫長(zhǎng)的暑假, 你的筆友Peter寫信來(lái)詢問(wèn)你的暑假計(jì)劃。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的基本信息給你的筆友回信, 告訴他你的暑假計(jì)劃。要求：1. 回信必須包含表格中的所有信息, 并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 字?jǐn)?shù)在80字左右, 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。2. 回信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名, 否則將以零分計(jì)。3. 書面表達(dá)必須寫在答題卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。Your planswhatwhyPlan onevisit grandparentsmiss themPlan twovisit Beijing and Shanghaiwant to open my eyesPlan threelearn senior（高中）English and math by myselfdream to go to a famous university………….Dear peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear peter ,Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After ing back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the ing senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university. That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours. Yours Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文分三個(gè)自然段。第一段點(diǎn)出文章主題you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After ing back有序列出三個(gè)計(jì)劃。文章結(jié)尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours總結(jié)。另外，文中為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來(lái)時(shí)will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。10．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件： 沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因, 你打算去哪兒旅游，以及你暑假的其他安排。提示詞語(yǔ): exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums提示問(wèn)題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫信，內(nèi)容包括：你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)他的郵件的原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。寫作時(shí)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)題目給出的這些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，組織語(yǔ)言，表達(dá)清楚。首先應(yīng)注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點(diǎn)，題目只是列出了一個(gè)提綱，沒(méi)有規(guī)定要學(xué)生寫什么，因此具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來(lái)發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學(xué)生的身份。其次注意使用正確的英語(yǔ)句式來(lái)表達(dá)。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講的是暑假的計(jì)劃，應(yīng)主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，be going to結(jié)構(gòu)或者will+動(dòng)詞原形都可以。保證句式準(zhǔn)確，注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯。使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件的原因，用了一句話簡(jiǎn)潔、明了。第二段介紹的是自己的旅行計(jì)劃；第三段是暑假的其他安排。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。文章中簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。如I39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for the ，使用了賓語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句；再如I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of 。還有一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。整篇文章表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開(kāi)展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹(shù)新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時(shí)應(yīng)該從以下幾個(gè)方面來(lái)規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛(ài)護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說(shuō)“謝謝”、“ 對(duì)不起”、“ 請(qǐng)”等禮貌語(yǔ)言……幫助他人助人為樂(lè)，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,_________________________________________________________________.Finally,________________________________________________________________.We should try our best to m