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ife will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when municating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,municate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感嘆句How time flies!,倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it spoken English when municating with ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8.(河南中考模擬)書面表達(dá)。同學(xué)們,從小到大,會(huì)有很多不同的人物伴隨著你成長(zhǎng),他們可能是你的家人、老師、朋友、同學(xué)……甚至是路人。他們或許對(duì)你產(chǎn)生了重要影響,進(jìn)而給你留下深刻印象。請(qǐng)以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 為題寫一篇英語作文,描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。要求:1. 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,內(nèi)容完整,語言流利。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校,姓名等個(gè)人信息。3. 80詞左右。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如because of,be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.(遼寧中考模擬)(B)按要求完成大作文(80詞左右)節(jié)約資源,保護(hù)環(huán)境,從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性,以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求:詞數(shù)80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),不得透露姓名等個(gè)人信息?!敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活,環(huán)境保護(hù),注意文章內(nèi)容?!驹斀狻渴紫赛c(diǎn)明如今的生活環(huán)境,越來越差,綠色生活勢(shì)在必行。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性。然后說我在日常生活中對(duì)綠色出行作出的貢獻(xiàn),騎自行車,出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先正確理解作文題目,不要偏題,本文是關(guān)于綠色生活,它的重要性,以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次,在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上,多運(yùn)用連詞,使文章升華,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,使文章更上一檔次。10.(陜西師大附中中考模擬)書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想和理想,為了理想而努力可以成就一個(gè)人的事業(yè)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“My Dream”為題,寫一篇英文短文,向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語句通順,意思連貫, 書寫工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)(姓名、校名和地名等);4. 詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others. To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for am going to read a are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their ’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“My Dream”為題,寫一篇英文短文,向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)時(shí)間過得飛快,似乎幾個(gè)月前才進(jìn)入初三,現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請(qǐng)以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試,學(xué)生沒有足夠的時(shí)間來進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng);2.有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力,但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這次考試的重要性,并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去;3.你在這最后一個(gè)月里的打算和安排……注意:1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語句通順、意思連貫;2.第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)90左右,短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!_____________