【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:；,使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫；,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep ，從這件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸對我的愛，溫暖而深沉的愛。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice ，爸爸說帶我去一個好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn39。t ，沒關(guān)系?！军c睛】注意寫作過程中，將要點展開并表達清楚，注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達。8．（靖江市靖城中學(xué)中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對于即將到來的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學(xué)們學(xué)得開心，學(xué)有信心，我校英文報刊將開展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比賽，請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，用英語簡要描述并適當(dāng)表達自己的觀點。內(nèi)容要點如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。更注重學(xué)生的語言能力，學(xué)生難得高分，因此有些學(xué)生可能灰心。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進學(xué)習(xí)方法。應(yīng)該認真計劃好時間，以便在學(xué)業(yè)和愛好間取得平衡。你的建議……（12點，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點。要求語句通順，意思連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語簡要描述如何面對中考，并適當(dāng)表達自己的觀點。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們面對中考會感到擔(dān)心，接下來介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達我的觀點。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（山東中考模擬）“揚帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。100 詞左右?！敬鸢浮縄39。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。11．（內(nèi)蒙古根河市阿龍山中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動，你們班開張了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。常識歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬（至少一點）偶像梅西，有足球天賦夢想考生自擬（至少一點）注意：1。詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2。短文須包括所有 要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. ____________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，