【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（河南中考模擬）親愛的同學(xué)，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請你以“My English Study”為題，請你談一談，這三年以來，你學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會(huì)。要求：、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。條理清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。否則，試卷按零分處理。【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。接下來敘述自己遇到的各種學(xué)習(xí)英語的困難：聽不懂老師的英語，記憶詞匯短語有困難等等。分別列出，行文流暢。用短語give up放棄，表示困難太大，難倒了自己。后來在老師的幫助下，克服了困難。逐步地Step by step，不斷取得進(jìn)步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ，結(jié)束全文。8．（長沙市開福區(qū)青竹湖湘一外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)該是怎樣的呢？請根據(jù)以下的信息提示，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容：健康飲食；早睡早起，不熬夜；參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。要求：必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；80詞左右；文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthy habitI think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（北京中考模擬）“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動(dòng)?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個(gè)很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因?yàn)槲覍ψ约旱挠⒄Z口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?！靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。10．（天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)，星期五早上在上學(xué)的路上目睹了一起交通事故。根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。時(shí)間星期五早上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。，司機(jī)撥打120求助。，女孩并無大礙。事故原因女孩騎車時(shí)闖紅燈，因此她對事故負(fù)有責(zé)任。你的建議如何做到安全出行（補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)具體做法）參考詞匯：檢查make an examination 對……負(fù)責(zé) be responsible for sth.要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè).（2）短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But f