【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday ?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門(mén)外見(jiàn)面。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。8．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英國(guó)筆友Susan要來(lái)溫州體驗(yàn)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化，請(qǐng)你為Susan設(shè)計(jì)溫州一日游的活動(dòng)，幫助她體驗(yàn)溫州的文化習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件：；；要求：1. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人身份信息；2. 詞數(shù)：110詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture． Sincerely waiting for your ing! Yours， Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。9．（山東中考模擬）緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊成長(zhǎng)記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。根據(jù)上述提示，請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。，信件的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過(guò)去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會(huì)用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。題目中并沒(méi)有給出具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛(ài)好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開(kāi)合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛(ài)好、特長(zhǎng)等方面進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對(duì)未來(lái)的希望。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二段回憶過(guò)去的生活，主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)；最后對(duì)未來(lái)提出希望，用到了一般將來(lái)時(shí)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。10．（天津中考模擬）你馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了，恩師難忘，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，向大家介紹你的一位老師（Ms Wang）。（1） Ms Wang的基本情況：學(xué)科、年齡、外貌；（以上內(nèi)容自擬）（2） 老師的特點(diǎn)：嚴(yán)格，與學(xué)生相處融洽，和善，耐心，有創(chuàng)造性；（3） 你對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)。參考詞匯：對(duì)某人嚴(yán)格的 be strict with sb. 創(chuàng)造性的 be creative要求：（1） 詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。（2） 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3） 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生介紹自己最喜歡的老師?！驹斀狻窟@篇寫(xiě)作考查考生對(duì)人物的描寫(xiě)。對(duì)人物的描寫(xiě)主要從基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及對(duì)其評(píng)價(jià)四個(gè)方面入手?？忌Y(jié)合著四個(gè)方面及所給信息，要做到信息全面，行文連貫。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫11．（山東中考模擬）寫(xiě)作現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來(lái)越多，為此，國(guó)家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛(ài)眼日。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體會(huì)，就如何愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)欄目寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方；3．養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書(shū)等。 要求：1．根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；3．詞數(shù)90左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it39。s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a g