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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!(B) My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.What good children his classmates are!【解析】【詳解】A篇:這是一篇話題作文,根據材料中的相關信息介紹一下如何才能構建文明和諧的社會。主要從對國家、社會的熱愛;對父母、師長、同學的尊重與關心;對環(huán)境的保護這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縇et’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. 讓我們熱衷于家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展,積極參與學校的各項活動。本題是由and 連接的句子?!靖叻志湫投縒e should also care for each other and help those in need. 我們也應該互相關心,幫助那些需要幫助的人。這句話的語言很好。B篇:這是一篇圖示作文,根據圖片的內容展開合理想象。圖片顯示的內容是:圖一,打籃球;圖二,有一個學生摔倒了,腿受傷了;圖三,同學們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。圖四,他的同學帶著花去看他。主要從這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縏he doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細地檢查了他,他不得不住院幾天。本題是由and 連接的并列句。【高分句型二】What good children his classmates are! 他的同學們多好?。∵@句話是由what引導的感嘆句?!军c睛】A篇:B篇:看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來提供目的、對象、時間、地點、內容等情景,要求作者借助圖畫,通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內容轉換成傳神達意的文字形式,用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內容。從寫作體裁上看,可說明介紹,可敘事記人、可寫景狀物,也可以發(fā)表議論??磮D作文主要考查考生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語言表達能力。想寫好看圖作文,必須遵循以下步驟:1. 仔細審題、弄清題目要求首先,必須通讀試題中的每一個字,認真觀察所給的每一幅圖畫,正確理解提示所提出的各種要求,從而明確作文的中心思想,判斷文章的類型、特點,了解文章的重點內容,力求切中題意。2. 審好圖,確定要素認真觀察圖中的故事發(fā)生于何時?何地?圖中的人物為何人?他們做了什么事情?結果如何?3. 考慮用恰當?shù)脑~語、句型和時態(tài)弄懂了圖上的大意后,在內心構思一個基本的框架,考慮用什么樣的句型、詞語、時態(tài)來充分表達文章的內容,盡可能用你熟悉的詞語或句型,力求語言準確、意思明了。4. 列出要點,組織語言在認真審題、弄清題意的基礎上,我們應逐個完整無誤地把內容要點列出來,我們可以在每幅圖畫的旁邊用簡單的詞語標出其所表達的要點,這樣,既可以提醒自己不要漏寫了要點,又能防止過分發(fā)揮。接著就可以將內容要點譯成英文詞語或句子,以便下一步組織語言,形成短文。要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞或過渡性語句,以使上下文更為連貫,過渡自然。5. 詳細得當對一些細節(jié)方面的內容,如果是文章必不可少的細節(jié),在寫作時不可將這些細節(jié)忽略。如果是可有可無的細節(jié),則可視具體情況進行增刪。因此,我們在審圖時,一定要注意各圖中的一些細節(jié)內容,看其是否影響文章的內容。6. 仔細檢查、修改文章寫完后,應進行必要的檢查、修改,力求全文內容表達準確、完整,并最大限度減少錯誤。8.(海南中考模擬)假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙,經常熬夜,吸煙,很少吃早餐,也沒有時間鍛煉,所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié),請你根據你父親的情況,給他寫一封信,談談你的看法并給他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫,語言流暢,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右,開頭和結尾部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示,確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知,這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信,因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據短文提示,把父親身體不好的原因寫清楚,并提出中肯的建議,表達出對父親的體貼與關愛,同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結構緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。9.(安徽中考模擬)假如你是李華,你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩,而合肥的夏天經常持續(xù)高溫,請你根據以下提示,用英文給他寫一封郵件,告訴他防暑降溫的方法。● 清淡飲食; ● 合理休息; ● 適當運動; ● ……注意: ;,可適當發(fā)揮;、學校名和地名;,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!