【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!（B） My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.What good children his classmates are!【解析】【詳解】A篇：這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何才能構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會。主要從對國家、社會的熱愛；對父母、師長、同學(xué)的尊重與關(guān)心；對環(huán)境的保護(hù)這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. 讓我們熱衷于家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展，積極參與學(xué)校的各項活動。本題是由and 連接的句子?！靖叻志湫投縒e should also care for each other and help those in need. 我們也應(yīng)該互相關(guān)心，幫助那些需要幫助的人。這句話的語言很好。B篇：這是一篇圖示作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容展開合理想象。圖片顯示的內(nèi)容是：圖一，打籃球；圖二，有一個學(xué)生摔倒了，腿受傷了；圖三，同學(xué)們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。圖四，他的同學(xué)帶著花去看他。主要從這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地檢查了他，他不得不住院幾天。本題是由and 連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縒hat good children his classmates are! 他的同學(xué)們多好啊！這句話是由what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句?！军c睛】A篇：B篇：看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來提供目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等情景，要求作者借助圖畫，通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容。從寫作體裁上看，可說明介紹，可敘事記人、可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論?？磮D作文主要考查考生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語言表達(dá)能力。想寫好看圖作文，必須遵循以下步驟：1. 仔細(xì)審題、弄清題目要求首先，必須通讀試題中的每一個字，認(rèn)真觀察所給的每一幅圖畫，正確理解提示所提出的各種要求，從而明確作文的中心思想，判斷文章的類型、特點，了解文章的重點內(nèi)容，力求切中題意。2. 審好圖，確定要素認(rèn)真觀察圖中的故事發(fā)生于何時?何地?圖中的人物為何人?他們做了什么事情?結(jié)果如何?3. 考慮用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、句型和時態(tài)弄懂了圖上的大意后，在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，考慮用什么樣的句型、詞語、時態(tài)來充分表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容，盡可能用你熟悉的詞語或句型，力求語言準(zhǔn)確、意思明了。4. 列出要點，組織語言在認(rèn)真審題、弄清題意的基礎(chǔ)上，我們應(yīng)逐個完整無誤地把內(nèi)容要點列出來，我們可以在每幅圖畫的旁邊用簡單的詞語標(biāo)出其所表達(dá)的要點，這樣，既可以提醒自己不要漏寫了要點，又能防止過分發(fā)揮。接著就可以將內(nèi)容要點譯成英文詞語或句子，以便下一步組織語言，形成短文。要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或過渡性語句，以使上下文更為連貫，過渡自然。5. 詳細(xì)得當(dāng)對一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的細(xì)節(jié)，在寫作時不可將這些細(xì)節(jié)忽略。如果是可有可無的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。因此，我們在審圖時，一定要注意各圖中的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，看其是否影響文章的內(nèi)容。6. 仔細(xì)檢查、修改文章寫完后，應(yīng)進(jìn)行必要的檢查、修改，力求全文內(nèi)容表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、完整，并最大限度減少錯誤。8．（海南中考模擬）假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達(dá)情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達(dá)出對父親的體貼與關(guān)愛，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!