【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章分為三個部分，第一部分，首先引出本文話題，并用Here’s the result from one ， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點列舉理由時，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯的文章。8．（江蘇贛榆實驗中學(xué)初三） 初中的三年即將過去，這三年里你一定學(xué)會了不少東西。假如你是Jack，你想給老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)你的感激之情。請根據(jù)下列提示，完成這封感謝信。詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。1. 學(xué)會了如何學(xué)習(xí)：課前預(yù)習(xí)；課堂認(rèn)真聽講，記筆記：課后認(rèn)真完成作業(yè)，及時復(fù)習(xí)；懂得了讀書的重要性，養(yǎng)成了好的閱讀習(xí)慣，為以后的學(xué)習(xí)做好準(zhǔn)備。2. 懂得了如何做人：在家里，愛父母和家人，幫父母做力所能及的事：在學(xué)校，尊重老師，關(guān)愛同學(xué)，做文明學(xué)生；在社會，遵守交通規(guī)則，愛護(hù)花草樹木，…（適當(dāng)補充）3. 以后的打算：……（適當(dāng)補充）Dear teachers,How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say Thank you, dear teachers. It is you who have taught me a lot of things.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear teachers,How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say Thank you, dear teachers. It is you who have taught me a lot of things.First，I learn how to learn. I preview before class, listen carefully in class and take notes. I finish homework carefully after class and review in time. I understand the importance of reading and develop good reading habits to prepare for future learning.Secondly, I know how to be a person. At home, I love parents and family and help parents do what they can. At school, I respect teachers, care for classmates, and try to be civilized students. In society, I obey traffic rules, love flowers and trees. I try to be a civilized teenager.I am going to study harder in high school. I will meet new challenges and enter my dream university. I will make greater contributions to society in the future. Yours,Jack【解析】9．（中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實驗學(xué)校中考模擬）A good book is important to me要求：1. 緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?！敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文，根據(jù)題目一本好書對我是重要的，自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容，可以是你讀了什么書，該書對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書為什么對你來說是重要的?！驹斀狻勘酒恼轮饕獜臑槭裁磳ξ抑匾@個角度來寫。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息，所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（山東中考模擬）每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時候有了哪些變化?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時候有了哪些變化?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)社會需要愛，時代呼喚愛。對善行、對愛心的感動，存在于每個人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動，而是一種顯示感動的勇氣。請為你身邊的人或事點贊，讓“點贊”