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n.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華,你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式,文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí),要注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫;注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn):(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如:缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……);。9.(江蘇中考模擬)假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時(shí)間曾向英語??端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。為此,編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄,邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項(xiàng):,不得抄寫短詩原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。,稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄,邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.(全國中考模擬)中共十八屆五中全會(huì)提出一對(duì)夫婦可生育兩個(gè)孩子政策后,全社會(huì)展開了熱烈的討論,某校也就是否想要個(gè)弟弟或妹妹對(duì)部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次問卷調(diào)查,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn),問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如圖所示:Do you want a little brother or sister? Do you want a little brother or sister? For(40%) For(40%) against(60%) against(60%) feel lonely any more each other, share the happiness and sadness3.…… feel lonely any more each other, share the happiness and sadness3.…… about parents’ love(打擾) his/her studying 3.…… about parents’ love(打擾) his/her studying 3.……注意:;,書寫工整,句式規(guī)范,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫使用正確;、地名。【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. Different people have different opinions. About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely any more. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents’ choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。內(nèi)容是某校就是否想要個(gè)弟弟或妹妹對(duì)部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行的一次問卷調(diào)查,寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。人稱主要為第一、三人稱。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,根據(jù)主題和所給要點(diǎn)列出提綱,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。但短文必須包含有要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在90詞左右。盡量使用高分句型。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn),列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等)。其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點(diǎn):1.調(diào)查結(jié)果;40%支持:不再孤獨(dú),彼此幫助,分享喜憂.60%反對(duì):擔(dān)心父母的愛,打擾學(xué)習(xí)…2.你的觀點(diǎn)常用到的重點(diǎn)短語:get used to 習(xí)慣于what39。s more 再者after all 畢竟as…as 一樣…本文提綱:最近,我們學(xué)校做了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于你想要一個(gè)弟弟還是妹妹的調(diào)查。不同的人有不同的意見。大約40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為有兄弟姐妹是件好事。他們可以互相幫助,一起分享快樂和悲傷。他們不會(huì)再感到孤獨(dú)了。更重要的是,他們認(rèn)為他們會(huì)得到更多的自由。但其他人不同意。他們認(rèn)為他們不會(huì)適應(yīng)這種變化。他們也擔(dān)心他們的父母不會(huì)像以前那樣愛他們。另外,他們擔(dān)心新出生的孩子會(huì)吵得他們學(xué)習(xí)不方便。在我看來,很難說有兄弟姐妹是好是壞。但我們應(yīng)該尊重父母的選擇。畢竟,他們是最終決定的人?!靖叻志湫汀?.Besides,they39。re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study.①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句.②so…that如此…以致于…,that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句.2.In my opinion,①it39。s hard to say ②whether it39。s good or bad to have a brother or sister.①it是形式主語,動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語.②say后面是whether 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句.3.①After all,they39。re the persons ②who will make the final decision.①after all 畢竟,做插入語.②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句,修飾先行詞presons,who作為從句的主語.【點(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,層次分明,所用句式句型比較高級(jí)。書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式,語言要規(guī)范,信息表達(dá)清晰、完整,意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。11.(四川中考模擬)書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始,你將面對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示,以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題,用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求:,進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范,注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息。詞數(shù):90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high schoo