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re was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,具有條理性。8.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容須包括:讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊;你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù))。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右(文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文??梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動,你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文,內(nèi)容須包括:1. 該諺語的含義;2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷。a) A friend in need is a friend indeed.b) Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯:諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一,第一個是“患難見真情”,第二個是“有志者事競成”?!驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語的形式出現(xiàn),所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個言語的意思,選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后,根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示,進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時,先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體10.(浙江中考模擬)如今,很多父母很關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí),想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況如下圖中 Tony 的母親。請簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容,分析圖中現(xiàn)象,談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh,并寫一篇 110 詞左右的短文向Parents 雜志投稿,讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章有所啟發(fā)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony39。s mother wanted to keep watch on Tony39。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。s point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don39。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫作文,根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下父母為了關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí),想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況,就這樣對嗎?仔細(xì)分析所提供的圖片內(nèi)容,主要從你的看法和建議這個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片中的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hen children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時,他們將來怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢?句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句?!靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會影響未來的自信心建設(shè),也會導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童,形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。11.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)時間過得飛快,似乎幾個月前才進(jìn)入初三,現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試,學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間來進(jìn)行課外活動;2.有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力,但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性,并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去;3.你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排……注意:1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語句通順、意思連貫;2.第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)90左右,短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________