【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 at39。s the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要從這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含電子郵件上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縂uilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜歡自然風(fēng)光，桂林值得一游。句子if you like natural 。【高分句型二】I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你會(huì)在這里過得很愉快。you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是賓語從句。8．（武漢外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)長跑是人們熱衷的體育活動(dòng)之一。武漢馬拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因獨(dú)具特色的賽道及賽事組織已成為一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom想知道關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。請(qǐng)用英文給他回一封電子郵件，介紹這項(xiàng)賽事。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：；，人們可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以結(jié)識(shí)新朋友；，吸引了很多人的關(guān)注；,如：中山大道、東湖綠道、黃鶴樓，被視為最美的馬拉松賽道；。注意：；，郵件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；，不要逐條翻譯參考詞匯： event track Greenway Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.I think the people in Wuhan likes the of them want to take part in it.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，給他介紹關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來組織語言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)。其中第五條需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)的個(gè)人想法，這一部分是不受限制的，學(xué)生們可以自由發(fā)揮，但需要注意內(nèi)容需要與全文大意連貫起來。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運(yùn)用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)需注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯題目中的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個(gè)高級(jí)句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并對(duì)信息進(jìn)行加工、處理和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加清楚、連貫。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，個(gè)別句子使用了過去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。文章句式以簡單句為主，表達(dá)簡潔、明了，穿插使用了復(fù)雜句式，如賓語從句、定語從句等。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the 。9．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動(dòng)，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（天津中考模擬）你馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了，恩師難忘，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，向大家介紹你的一位老師（Ms Wang）。（1） Ms Wang的基本情況：學(xué)科、年齡、外貌；（以上內(nèi)容自擬）（2） 老師的特點(diǎn)：嚴(yán)格，與學(xué)生相處融洽，和善，耐心，有創(chuàng)造性；（3） 你對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)。參考詞匯：對(duì)某人嚴(yán)格的 be strict with sb. 創(chuàng)造性的 be creative要求：（1） 詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。（2） 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3） 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is o