【文章內容簡介】 etter do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達86. 如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。上周我班學生對如何減壓、放松進行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請根據提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數：80~100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請你根據Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內容合理,信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。11．（山東中考模擬） 書面表達 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時間來到中國已經兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經去過長城，故宮等名勝。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說，現在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習漢語。夢想去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。根據內容可知本文使用的時態(tài)有一般現在時，一般過去式和現在完成時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 來到中國已經兩年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經去過長城，故宮等名勝。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of . 過去喜歡看科幻小說，現在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經讀完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習漢語。He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare . 去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根據提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。點睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達要符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順。（1）學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）