【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。7．（江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國交流學(xué)生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對所有要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。文章時態(tài)用一般過去時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（阜寧縣新世紀(jì)實驗中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請給七月的你寫一封信，談?wù)勀闵磉叴嬖诘膯栴}，你打算如何解決，鼓勵自己生活還有詩和遠(yuǎn)方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。要求：1．表達清楚，語法正確，語句通順，上下文連貫； 2．必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic （悲觀的）. So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯的一篇文章。10．（北京中考模擬）題目①假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英國友好校下周將要來訪。學(xué)校國際部正在招募接待英國學(xué)生的志愿者，陪伴他們度過周末。你想成為志愿者。請用英語寫一封申請信，在信中說明你申請的理由，以及你打算拿給英國學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動。提示詞語：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they