【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．（江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國(guó)交流學(xué)生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，感謝信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（阜寧縣新世紀(jì)實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢(mèng)想……傾訴是一副良方。請(qǐng)給七月的你寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀闵磉叴嬖诘膯?wèn)題，你打算如何解決，鼓勵(lì)自己生活還有詩(shī)和遠(yuǎn)方。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封給自己的信。要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)句通順，上下文連貫； 2．必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic （悲觀的）. So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫(xiě)給未來(lái)的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個(gè)方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點(diǎn)題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫(xiě)完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫(xiě)及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（北京中考模擬）題目①假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英國(guó)友好校下周將要來(lái)訪(fǎng)。學(xué)校國(guó)際部正在招募接待英國(guó)學(xué)生的志愿者，陪伴他們度過(guò)周末。你想成為志愿者。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，在信中說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由，以及你打算拿給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng)。提示詞語(yǔ)：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問(wèn)題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they