【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 面作用可以寫有利于我們的溝通與交流，通過上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情，手機的負(fù)面作用可以寫手機對健康的危害，對學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的影響等等。最后總結(jié)并發(fā)出呼吁。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。8．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)生命就像是一種回聲，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播種什么就收獲什么，你給予什么就得到什么。因此，人們常說“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。請以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫一篇短文。要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點明確，語法正確，有說服力；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 80詞左右。Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Helping Others Is Helping OurselvesNobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近日，你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生，學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會友，饋贈親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……（自擬兩點）。注意:，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個都有自己的特點。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：要點是否齊全，適當(dāng)補充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10．（廣東實驗中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)農(nóng)歷五月初五，我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動，請你邀請外國友人Amy來校參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：時間：農(nóng)歷五月初五地點：學(xué)校操場目的：深入了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容：文化展覽歷史介紹：兩千多年，紀(jì)念屈原體驗民間活動：賽龍舟，包粽子活動意義：1．2．參考詞匯：農(nóng)歷：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特別