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all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫(xiě)信,介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。要注意郵件的寫(xiě)作格式,根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)。 knowledge, 請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。m terribly sorry I couldn39。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫(xiě)信,內(nèi)容包括:你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)他的郵件的原因;你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)封回信,簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果:1.節(jié)水節(jié)電. 2.垃圾分類(lèi) 3.少用紙巾,重拾手帕4.步行、騎自行車(chē)或公交出行、參考詞匯:low carbon低碳;tissue紙巾詞數(shù):100詞左右。參考詞匯:農(nóng)歷:Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如learn from,want to know something,the Chinese traditional festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,share with,more than 2000 years,according to,a kind of,in memory of,In a word,look back on history,get together with family,in the near future等。:注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀整潔。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。大多數(shù)中國(guó)人喜歡喝茶。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn),根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。功效有益健康,提神醒腦。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。要求:1. 思路清晰,觀點(diǎn)明確,語(yǔ)法正確,有說(shuō)服力;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);3. 80詞左右。要求從三個(gè)方面去完成寫(xiě)作:1. 手機(jī)的正面作用;2. 手機(jī)給人們帶來(lái)的煩惱;3. 如何防止成為“手機(jī)控”。7.(請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息,以 “Learn to Express Thanks” 為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”(Live Green, Live Better)? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮), 為??庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。而固定句型it is important for us to municate with each other and share our happiness and 39。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來(lái)介紹某人的最?lèi)?ài)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)句子來(lái)組織這些材料,在描寫(xiě)外貌和性格時(shí),會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。3.((文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名)【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。prevalents responsibility to protect them and此處as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?!驹斀狻勘疚膶?xiě)了我的第一次做飯,先交代背景知識(shí),因?yàn)楦改覆辉诩?,所以我不得不自己?dòng)手,動(dòng)手做的過(guò)程中,由于沒(méi)有經(jīng)驗(yàn),理所當(dāng)然地失敗了。1. 簡(jiǎn)要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格?!军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見(jiàn)的一種寫(xiě)作類(lèi)型。揚(yáng)州市梅嶺中學(xué)中考模擬)假如你是Liu Bin,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給筆友Bob回復(fù)郵件。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要求談?wù)剬?duì)自己的看法:1. 手機(jī)的正面作用;2. 手機(jī)給人們帶來(lái)的煩惱;3. 如何防止成為“手機(jī)控”。另外,寫(xiě)作時(shí),還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接,使文意連貫,表達(dá)流暢。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如adj+enough,on the one hand,on the other hand,make sb do,get into trouble,thanks to,it is adj for sb to do sth。初寫(xiě)短文。江蘇中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)近日,你校迎來(lái)一批來(lái)自英國(guó)的交流生,學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。寫(xiě)完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等)。喝茶有益于人們的健康。寫(xiě)作六步法::文體,時(shí)態(tài),人稱(chēng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件?!军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱(chēng)為第一,三人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:We can do……,we’d better……,we suggest……,which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件: 沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因, 你打算去哪兒旅游,以及你暑假的其他安排。其次注意使用正確的英語(yǔ)句式來(lái)表達(dá)。第二段介紹的是自己的旅行計(jì)劃;第三段是暑假的其他安排。整篇文章表達(dá)流暢,意思連貫。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件,告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。 I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my 同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。70%的學(xué)生贊成1. 學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好,但擅長(zhǎng)體育、藝術(shù);2. 相互學(xué)習(xí),發(fā)展友誼;30%的學(xué)生反對(duì)1. 部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常上課講話而不認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講;2. 經(jīng)常問(wèn)問(wèn)題,影響別人。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如first of all,grow up,grow older,marry with,burden on,have to do, take care of,by oneself,have no play