【正文】 it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。 I39。What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? What are you going to do there? food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet?knowledge, invention, 提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。13．（還有一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。m terribly sorry I couldn39。文章中簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件的原因，用了一句話簡(jiǎn)潔、明了。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講的是暑假的計(jì)劃，應(yīng)主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，be going to結(jié)構(gòu)或者will+動(dòng)詞原形都可以。首先應(yīng)注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點(diǎn)，題目只是列出了一個(gè)提綱，沒(méi)有規(guī)定要學(xué)生寫(xiě)什么，因此具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來(lái)發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學(xué)生的身份。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫(xiě)信，內(nèi)容包括：你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)他的郵件的原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。提示詞語(yǔ): exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums提示問(wèn)題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，向我的英國(guó)朋友Peppa寫(xiě)信，介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)封回信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類(lèi) 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車(chē)或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數(shù)：100詞左右。11．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。參考詞匯：農(nóng)歷：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。2．內(nèi)容包括：時(shí)間：農(nóng)歷五月初五地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng)目的：深入了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容：文化展覽歷史介紹：兩千多年，紀(jì)念屈原體驗(yàn)民間活動(dòng)：賽龍舟，包粽子活動(dòng)意義：1．廣東實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)農(nóng)歷五月初五，我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)友人Amy來(lái)校參加。：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀整潔。合理使用連詞。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買(mǎi)茶作為禮物。大多數(shù)中國(guó)人喜歡喝茶。中