【正文】 色添彩。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。短詩如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項：，不得抄寫短詩原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。9．（參考要點：（時間、內(nèi)容……）。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……）；。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。8．（t use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：先仔細(xì)審題，這是寫好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來，一定要確定好文章的重點，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短語和句式，增加文章的色彩．本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious ，指出環(huán)境問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重，然后按照題目要求逐一列出現(xiàn)在所存在的問題。s time for us to protect our world． Firstly，we shouldn39?！敬鸢浮縏he environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People39。丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬）初級寫作今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等，而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫一篇短文?！军c睛】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。根據(jù)要點內(nèi)容可知短語主要應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，主要是第一人稱，句型以簡單句為主。t lift him up, or he 39。3. 100個詞匯左右。要求：，以使行文連貫。短文內(nèi)容如下：1. 描述亊件。6．（【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life ，她仍然笑對生活?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎he takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。人稱為第三人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.My classmate Bai Yang es from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students. She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇人物介紹。她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時間做志愿者工作。遼寧初三） 生活中總有些不經(jīng)意的事讓你感動，總有些平凡的人讓你難以忘記。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。參考詞匯:十字路口 crossroads 在……猶豫不決 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back 【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹發(fā)生在我的好朋友王強(qiáng)身上的一件事。:80100。......要求: 。,不敢獨自穿過十字路口。 Qiang騎車回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要過馬路。4．（整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！驹斀狻渴紫?，第一句話直接點明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importa