【正文】 e thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對(duì)將來提出兩點(diǎn)希望。將來希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。交通：新的飛機(jī)場(chǎng)已投入使用多年。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。5． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵(lì)；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。開頭我要介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，接下來介紹我們?yōu)榈吞忌羁梢宰龅氖隆懽髦凶⒁鈹⑹鲰樞?，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4．書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國(guó)朋友Peppa向你來信詢問討論情況。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。 don39。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don39。我校學(xué)生的近視問題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。2019年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)