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hy do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復數(shù)形式,時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述具體怎么做時,描寫細致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。9.書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報“英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信,說說你的計劃?;顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結尾己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。10.上周,你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。現(xiàn)在,請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意:;,書寫工整、規(guī)范;。生詞提示:electric 討論結果25人表示同意35人不同意理由;。,騎電動車不安全;,騎電動車也快不起來?!敬鸢浮縇ast week, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it, because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles, for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析:本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文,而且要做到表達清楚,語句通順,意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知,本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來,不要遺漏任何一個,書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明,談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點:短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由,結構清晰,要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確,書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ,理由也很充分??键c:提綱類作文。