【正文】 and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點，注意理順要點，防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。9．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。生詞提示：electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。，騎電動車不安全；，騎電動車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c：提綱類作文。10．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80100詞． 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩．請根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程，按內(nèi)容及要求，用英文完成寫作．內(nèi)容包括：1．Whichcourse（s）doyoulike？2．Whydoyoulikeit/them？3．Whatcanyoulearnfromit/them？寫作要求：1．依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程（數(shù)量不限）；2．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名及姓名． Ofallthecourses，Ilike __________________________．【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文，主要講述你喜歡的學科、原因以及你從你選擇的學科中學到了什么。注意時態(tài)的運用，靈活運用所學單詞、短語和句型。切記不要遺漏要點。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學科對他的生活的意義。：單詞短語：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復合不定代詞時，形容詞放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導的表語從句?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復合不定代詞時，形容詞放后面等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。