【正文】 ng forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。9．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來！請你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。，幫家長做家務(wù)。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。；要點齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點?？键c：考查提綱作文。10．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。現(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。生詞提示：electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。，騎電動車不安全；，騎電動車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c：提綱類作文。