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【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結(jié)合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。5.假如你叫李華,最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時何地見面。提示詞語:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館,接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?,最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。6.書面表達以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。要求:?!敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文,要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片,弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情,用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地敘述出來,并簡單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。因此寫作前,要仔細(xì)看圖片,了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情,并提煉出要點,列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等,或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過分析可知,這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài),注意謂語動詞形式的變化,尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序,這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語表達和漢語的習(xí)慣不同,不能逐詞去翻譯,應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用簡單句的基本句型,如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,符合圖片所傳達的信息,表述準(zhǔn)確