【正文】 式對(duì)我們每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都是至關(guān)重要的。假如你是李明，你們學(xué)校將開(kāi)展以How to keep healthy，體育鍛煉和好的生活習(xí)慣等方面寫一篇演講稿。要求：，意思連貫，書寫工整。（姓名，校名和地名等）:不少于70詞。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。（請(qǐng)把標(biāo)題和已給出的開(kāi)頭抄寫在答題卡上）HowtokeephealthyHi, Everyone, I39。mgladtogiveaspeechhere.Mytopicis Howtokeep healthy.【答案】 Hi, Everyone, I39。m glad to give a speech here. My topic is How to keep healthy. As students, we should not only study hard but also have strong and healthy bodies. So it is very important to develop a healthy living habit. And there are many things we can do in our daily life to keep healthy. First, keep doing exercise. It can help you reduce pressure and make your body strong. Jogging, walking after meals and dancing are good choice. Second, Develop a good eating habit. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit instead of junk food and sugar. Third, Enough and good sleep is good for our health. So don’t stay up late. I hope my advice can help you. Thanks for listening.【解析】本文要求以How to keep healthy為題寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容從健康飲食，體育鍛煉和好的生活習(xí)慣等方面去表達(dá)。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。在提出建議時(shí)，可以使用first，second???進(jìn)行列舉，使文章顯得更加條理。最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡。在提出建議時(shí)，可以使用first，second???進(jìn)行列舉，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；條理性更強(qiáng)。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。16．（黑龍江中考模擬）書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯，是屹立在知識(shí)海洋里的燈塔。英國(guó)著名作家培根曾經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò)：“閱讀使人充實(shí)。”可見(jiàn)閱讀在每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中都起著至關(guān)重要的作用。請(qǐng)以“Reading Is Important for Us”為題， 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 讀書的重要原因；2. 你在生活中是如何閱讀的注意：1. 詞數(shù)在80~100詞之間；2. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【答案】Reading Is Important for UsThere is a famous saying, “Reading makes full man.”Reading is very important in our life. It can not only improve our happiness of life but also increase our knowledge. It is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language.When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文屬于話題作文，要表達(dá)閱讀的重要性。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù), be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 某英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關(guān)分享的主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語(yǔ)短文。注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個(gè)提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能用到的表達(dá)，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。18．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個(gè)大概的介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點(diǎn)比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時(shí)注意郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Her