【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。7．（天津中考模擬） 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進(jìn)行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。8．（全國中考模擬）中共十八屆五中全會提出一對夫婦可生育兩個孩子政策后,全社會展開了熱烈的討論,某校也就是否想要個弟弟或妹妹對部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次問卷調(diào)查,請你根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn),問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如圖所示：Do you want a little brother or sister? Do you want a little brother or sister? For（40%） For（40%） against（60%） against（60%） feel lonely any more each other, share the happiness and sadness3.…… feel lonely any more each other, share the happiness and sadness3.…… about parents’ love（打擾） his/her studying 3.…… about parents’ love（打擾） his/her studying 3.……注意：；,書寫工整,句式規(guī)范,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫使用正確；、地名。【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. Different people have different opinions. About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely any more. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents’ choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。內(nèi)容是某校就是否想要個弟弟或妹妹對部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行的一次問卷調(diào)查，寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告，并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。人稱主要為第一、三人稱。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點(diǎn)列出提綱，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。但短文必須包含有要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在90詞左右。盡量使用高分句型。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．調(diào)查結(jié)果；40%支持：不再孤獨(dú)，彼此幫助，分享喜憂．60%反對：擔(dān)心父母的愛，打擾學(xué)習(xí)…2．你的觀點(diǎn)常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：get used to 習(xí)慣于what39。s more 再者after all 畢竟as…as 一樣…本文提綱：最近，我們學(xué)校做了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于你想要一個弟弟還是妹妹的調(diào)查。不同的人有不同的意見。大約40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為有兄弟姐妹是件好事。他們可以互相幫助，一起分享快樂和悲傷。他們不會再感到孤獨(dú)了。更重要的是，他們認(rèn)為他們會得到更多的自由。但其他人不同意。他們認(rèn)為他們不會適應(yīng)這種變化。他們也擔(dān)心他們的父母不會像以前那樣愛他們。另外，他們擔(dān)心新出生的孩子會吵得他們學(xué)習(xí)不方便。在我看來，很難說有兄弟姐妹是好是壞。但我們應(yīng)該尊重父母的選擇。畢竟，他們是最終決定的人?！靖叻志湫汀?．Besides，they39。re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．②so…that如此…以致于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．2．In my opinion，①it39。s hard to say ②whether it39。s good or bad to have a brother or sister．①it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．②say后面是whether 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．3．①After all，they39。re the persons ②who will make the final decision．①after all 畢竟，做插入語．②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞presons，who作為從句的主語．【點(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰，時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級。書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式，語言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。9．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中生活即將結(jié)束。在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事，請以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。講述一個你最難忘的人或事。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。,短文連貫通順，80詞左右。【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school lifeFor these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。【詳解】，確定寫作的目標(biāo)，寫自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事，描述難忘的人用第三人稱，講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時，開頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述，用一般現(xiàn)在時；書寫時要圍繞中心“unforgettable”，敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了，注意短語、句型的正確使用。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，緊扣主題，前呼后應(yīng)。：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合；短語how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語言增色不少。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在本周班會課上，同學(xué)們對“初中生什么時候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening