【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話(huà)題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢保约澳銓?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周?chē)械哪茉词且环N習(xí)慣。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開(kāi)車(chē)。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過(guò)這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹(shù)木。最后，我會(huì)帶著籃子購(gòu)物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來(lái)越好。低碳，快樂(lè)生活。我們采取行動(dòng)吧。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫(xiě)作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿(mǎn)充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫(xiě)是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意?shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀(guān)整潔。10．（云南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)提示：轉(zhuǎn)眼間三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在這三年的學(xué)習(xí)與生活中一定有些讓你難忘的人或事物。請(qǐng)以“ An Unforgettable …”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，記敘你難忘的人或事物以及你的感受。要求：1. 請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)充完整后再作答；2. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4. 將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上。寫(xiě)在本試題卷上無(wú)效。【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話(huà)題作文。根據(jù)以“ An Unforgettable …”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，記敘你難忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去式時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長(zhǎng)記錄袋時(shí)還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿(mǎn)意的答卷。請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，記錄你過(guò)去三年中難忘的校園生活，并描述自己對(duì)將來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)生活的期望。文章應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：過(guò)去三年校園生活所得，真的很感激老師的幫助。，互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助。，盡自己最大的努力幫助有需要的人。4…….（補(bǔ)充12點(diǎn)所得）過(guò)去三年校園生活所失。3. ……（補(bǔ)充12點(diǎn)所失）今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算……（12句話(huà)描述自己未來(lái)的打算）要求：① 詞數(shù)100左右；② 短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；③ 文中需包括所有寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過(guò)渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫；④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。My Unforgettable School LifeHow time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫(xiě)下來(lái)，將所給要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)，分三部分來(lái)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)出“三年所得、三年所失、未來(lái)的打算。2. 先翻譯關(guān)鍵詞再來(lái)組句。在過(guò)去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識(shí)learn a lot of knowledge, 對(duì)某人感激be grateful to sb, 對(duì)我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛(ài)好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)I am not good at sports，在未來(lái)In the future…，簡(jiǎn)要寫(xiě)出自己對(duì)未來(lái)的規(guī)劃。3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆為過(guò)去，所以時(shí)態(tài)上要用一般過(guò)去式，最后一項(xiàng)對(duì)將來(lái)的規(guī)劃，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。4. 最后一項(xiàng)對(duì)未來(lái)的規(guī)劃，既是對(duì)所得所失的理解，也是對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。5. 寫(xiě)句子時(shí)要注意人稱(chēng)和數(shù)要一致。12．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀(guān)，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)調(diào)查報(bào)告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來(lái)工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥?lái)工作選擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class