【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q，談?wù)勛约簩δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎?，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。9．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)某英文報社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動，你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個是“患難見真情”，第二個是“有志者事競成”?！驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個言語的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體10．（武漢外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)長跑是人們熱衷的體育活動之一。武漢馬拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因獨具特色的賽道及賽事組織已成為一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom想知道關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。請用英文給他回一封電子郵件，介紹這項賽事。內(nèi)容包括以下要點：；，人們可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以結(jié)識新朋友；，吸引了很多人的關(guān)注；,如：中山大道、東湖綠道、黃鶴樓，被視為最美的馬拉松賽道；。注意：；，郵件的開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)；，不要逐條翻譯參考詞匯： event track Greenway Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.I think the people in Wuhan likes the of them want to take part in it.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，給他介紹關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來組織語言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實。其中第五條需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補充一到兩點的個人想法，這一部分是不受限制的，學(xué)生們可以自由發(fā)揮，但需要注意內(nèi)容需要與全文大意連貫起來。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時需注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯題目中的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個高級句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并對信息進(jìn)行加工、處理和補充，使文意更加清楚、連貫。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，個別句子使用了過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。文章句式以簡單句為主，表達(dá)簡潔、明了，穿插使用了復(fù)雜句式，如賓語從句、定語從句等。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the 。11．（湖北中考模擬）在“讓夢想照進(jìn)現(xiàn)實”的主題班會上，同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩，請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點如下：，對英語沒什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。，曾經(jīng)很沮喪，想放棄英語。，自己開始認(rèn)真對待英語學(xué)習(xí)。，英語水平有較大的提高。（一兩點）注意：詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： adv. 很少，不常