【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。8．（江蘇中考模擬）目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。 贊成者的觀點(diǎn)1. 能夠?qū)W得更好，考試考得更好，上更好的高中；2. 避免花太多時(shí)間看電視、玩游戲。反對者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。你的觀點(diǎn)1. 課堂上好好學(xué)就足夠了，補(bǔ)課不必要；2. 課后可以自己......注意：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法通順，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括提示的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)；3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分四段寫：總體簡單描述話題；贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。9．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢保约澳銓Α暗吞忌睢钡恼J(rèn)識。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你對“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習(xí)慣。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開車。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后，我會(huì)帶著籃子購物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來越好。低碳，快樂生活。我們采取行動(dòng)吧?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。10．（北京中考模擬）題目②“持之以恒，方得始?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺??！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí)，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題，文句通順。“跑步”，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，