【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ant factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè)，一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達出來。要求：（1）將標題補充完整，80詞左右；（2） 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3） 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題，寫一篇短文，感謝我的老師?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。d like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐，接下來介紹她對我的幫助，最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）當代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡單》一書中，用自己的點滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1. 你認為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時間、地點、過程與感受）。3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。 寫作要求：1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；4. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉?；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難?？傮w來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國交流學(xué)生Max，你的英國同學(xué)Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際情況用英語給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意：?；貜?fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。m sorry I haven39。t written to you till now. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【答案】Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。m sorry I haven39。t written to you till am really busy with the course and making new friends these here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.My school starts at 8 fi