【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。：短語(yǔ)：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。句型：被動(dòng)句型。9．（黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Alex來(lái)信說(shuō)他要來(lái)中國(guó)做交換生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給Alex寫一封回信，介紹一下你的近況，并給他一些在中國(guó)如何與同學(xué)融洽相處的建議。寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 歡迎他來(lái)中國(guó)。2. 介紹你的近況： （1）大多數(shù)時(shí)間忙于復(fù)習(xí)備考。（2）有時(shí)在戶外做運(yùn)動(dòng)。（3）很少有時(shí)間外出娛樂(lè)。3. 給他一些在中國(guó)如何與同學(xué)融洽相處的建議。寫作要求： 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名?？蛇m當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。至少80詞。Dear Alex， How are you doing ?_________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Alex， How are you doing? You said that you would e to China as an exchange student in your last letter. Wele to China. You want to know about me. Let me tell you. I have been spending most of my time reviewing for exams these days. Sometimes I do sports outdoors. But I seldom have time to go out for fun. You said you will worry about how to get along with students when you are in China. In fact, you don’t have to be worried about it. Chinese people are friendly. You should take an active part in all kinds of activities in school. If your friends have some questions, you should help them. They39。ll thank you for your help. You can bring some small gifts to your classmates when you are invited to their homes. I hope you can get on well with your classmates. Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文，假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Alex來(lái)信說(shuō)他要來(lái)中國(guó)做交換生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給Alex寫一封回信，介紹一下你的近況，并給他一些在中國(guó)如何與同學(xué)融洽相處的建議。注意書信的格式。本文人稱主要是第一和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，至少80詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：親愛(ài)的亞歷克斯，你好嗎？你在上一封信中說(shuō)你將作為交換生來(lái)中國(guó)。歡迎來(lái)到中國(guó)。你想了解我最近忙些什么。讓我告訴你。這幾天我大部分時(shí)間都在復(fù)習(xí)考試。有時(shí)我在戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。但我很少有時(shí)間出去玩。你說(shuō)你在中國(guó)時(shí)會(huì)擔(dān)心如何與學(xué)生相處。事實(shí)上，你不必?fù)?dān)心。中國(guó)人很友好。你應(yīng)該積極參加學(xué)校的各種活動(dòng)。如果你的朋友有問(wèn)題，你應(yīng)該幫助他們。他們會(huì)感謝你的幫助。當(dāng)你被邀請(qǐng)去他們家時(shí)，你可以給你的同學(xué)帶一些小禮物。我希望你能和同學(xué)們相處得很好。最美好的祝福！你的，李明【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10．（廣東中考模擬）近年來(lái)，我國(guó)校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不 敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問(wèn)題等嚴(yán)重后果。 請(qǐng)以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以 使行文連貫；2. 80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問(wèn)題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)校園欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語(yǔ)以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（江蘇中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來(lái)，給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)，出行方便，減少污染 ，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問(wèn)題 你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開(kāi)合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life.