【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony39。s mother wanted to keep watch on Tony39。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。s point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don39。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下父母為了關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí)，想隨時(shí)監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況，就這樣對(duì)嗎？仔細(xì)分析所提供的圖片內(nèi)容，主要從你的看法和建議這個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時(shí)，他們將來(lái)怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會(huì)影響未來(lái)的自信心建設(shè)，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)。”我們大多數(shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)以寫(xiě)一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開(kāi)放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過(guò)的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開(kāi)頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開(kāi)頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過(guò)程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫(xiě)一下自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過(guò)的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫(xiě)了自己做飯給媽媽?xiě)c祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了事情的過(guò)程；最后一段寫(xiě)了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡(jiǎn)單》一書(shū)中，用自己的點(diǎn)滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請(qǐng)以 My Happiness 為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1. 你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程與感受）。3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。 寫(xiě)作要求：1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；4. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)，這篇作文要求寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)自己的幸福觀，描述自己對(duì)于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過(guò)去的幸福往事的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，可以使用到的短語(yǔ)表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉叄籶ut your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績(jī)很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見(jiàn)家長(zhǎng)；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。總體來(lái)說(shuō)這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開(kāi)展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹(shù)新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時(shí)應(yīng)該從以下幾個(gè)方面來(lái)規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛(ài)護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說(shuō)“謝謝”、“ 對(duì)不起”、“ 請(qǐng)”等禮貌語(yǔ)言……幫助他人助人為樂(lè)，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)……